雅思高分作文范文及解析

　　Children who grow up in families which are short of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree？ Some feel that the children of low income families are better equipped to deal with difficulties posed by the real world when they grow up and they also believe the privileged children of wealthy families are less fit to deal with these difficulties . The implications and veracity of this argument seem self-evident， but in fact require closer examination.

　　點(diǎn)評(píng)：

　　1+ 1  模式，最后 1 句為主題句。此段的.主題句稍微有點(diǎn)特殊，它的確否定了前面所提到的觀點(diǎn)，從而表達(dá)出了自己的觀點(diǎn)，此外還引出了下文。

　　特別是最后半句：but in fact require closer examination ，感覺是在拋磚引玉。

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